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Time Transitions

 

Shortly after that Meanwhile Soon
Along the way Before long Earlier
After all of that Later on Eventually
An hour later Without delay Immediately
At that very moment At last Next
Later that same day During all of this As soon as
Not a moment too soon While this was happening  

 

Different Ways to Say “Said”

A
announced   accused       assured

argued           apologized  addressed

asked             agreed

advised         answered          added

B
beseeched          boomed       bellowed

boasted             began               begged        beamed

C
countered               croaked               consoled    

chorused                 complained       cried

corrected           cheered       cackled

continued         complained

D
declared            drawled            denied

E
exclaimed         encouraged    enthused
effervesced       echoed


F
frowned            finished           fumed

G
greeted       grinned            gulped

grumbled         groaned     giggled     gasped

H
hissed        hollered

I
inquired           informed          interrupted
insisted            instructed

L
laughed


M
muttered          moaned                  mumbled

motioned          murmured

N
nodded

O
offered       objected

P
panted        pondered           protested          

pleaded       proclaimed

Q
questioned

R
rambled            repeated            responded

ranted               raved                   requested

S
sneered       slurred       spoke

stormed            sang                shouted

screamed         squealed       scolded

sighed               stated            suggested
spluttered      snapped        snarled

stammered    screeched    sobbed 

sniffed             shrieked

T
tutted             teased         taunted

Describing People

Sneaky                      clever                                     devilish                      instigator

stealthy                    celebrator                              procrastinator          cheeky

sleuth                       dreamer                                  dancer                       artist dreamer                   flirter                                     traveler                       friendly

writer                       funny                                     private                        observer
detail oriented        clumsy                                  easygoing                    sporty
hyper                      musical                                 movie lover                 creative
explorer                  beautiful                               curious                        silly
crazy                       unique                                  cheerful                      different
radiant                        adventurous                         hardworking              persistent
amazing                    innovative                              strong                         Neurotic
Anxious                     Hopeless                               Romantic                   Playful
Serious                      Insane                                   Insecure                    Creative
Intelligent                  Loyal                                    Honest                       Blunt
Open minded           Passive                                  Lovable                     Fun
Sensitive                   Unstable                               Miserable                 Thoughtful
Stressed                    Needy                                   Dark                          Morbid
Destructive                Depressed                           Perfectionist             Fragile

Understanding         Extremist                             Conscientious            Predictable
Sister                          Short                                    Emotional                  Stubborn
Non-conformist        Obsessive                             Ridiculous                  aunt
daughter                    chocolate lover                     animal lover              outdoorsy

gabby                         inquisitive                              kid-friendly

Confident                   intelligent                              approachable           discerning
polite                          contemplative                       an idealist                  meticulous
independent              self-assured                          appreciative              Analytical
Believer                     Centered                                Easy-going                Eternal
Fearless                     Goal setter                             Grateful                    Intuitive
Joyful                         Kind                                        Learned                     Loving
Music lover               Negotiator                             Observant                  Peaceful
Poetic                         Positive                                  Quiet                          Radiant
Reasonable               Sensible                                  Teacher                     Thinker
Unlimited                   Understanding                     Victorious                  Yoga lover
Young                        Determined                           Innovative                   Friend

Over Protective       Jealous                                  Needy                         Daring
Persuasive                Happy                                    Entertaining              Pretty
Enigmatic                  Persistent                              Nosy                           Noisy
Sleepy                        Shy                                         Scared                       Helpful
Procrastinator           Weepy                                  Homebody                 Nurturing
Supportive                 Proud                                   Down-to-earth          Country

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Character Feelings

You can describe your character’s feelings in more exact terms than just “happy” or “sad.” Check these lists for the exact nuance to describe your character’s intensity of feelings.

Intensity of
Feelings

HAPPY

SAD

ANGRY

CONFUSED

High Elated
Excited
Overjoyed
Thrilled
Exuberant
Ecstatic
Fired up
Delighted
Depressed
Disappointed
Alone
Hurt
Left out
Dejected
Hopeless
Sorrowful
Crushed
Furious
Enraged
Outraged
Aggravated
Irate
Seething
Bewildered
Trapped
Troubled
Desperate
Lost
Medium Cheerful
Up
Good
Relieved
Satisfied
Contented
Heartbroken
Down
Upset
Distressed
Regret
Upset
Mad
Annoyed
Frustrated
Agitated
Hot
Disgusted
Disorganized
Foggy
Misplaced
Disoriented
Mixed up
Mild Glad
Content
Satisfied
Pleasant
Fine
Mellow
Pleased
Unhappy
Moody
Blue
Sorry
Lost
Bad
Dissatisfied
Perturbed
Uptight
Dismayed
Put out
Irritated
Touchy
Unsure
Puzzled
Bothered
Uncomfortable
Undecided
Baffled
Perplexed
Intensity of
Feelings

AFRAID

WEAK

STRONG

GUILTY

High Terrified
Horrified
Scared stiff
Petrified
Fearful
Panicky
Helpless
Hopeless
Beat
Overwhelmed
Impotent
Small
Exhausted
Drained
Powerful
Aggressive
Gung ho
Potent
Super
Forceful
Proud
Determined
Sorrowful
Remorseful
Ashamed
Unworthy
Worthless
Medium Scared
Frightened
Threatened
Insecure
Uneasy
Shocked
Dependent
Incapable
Lifeless
Tired
Rundown
Lazy
Insecure
Shy
Energetic
Capable
Confident
Persuasive
Sure
Sorry
Lowdown
Sneaky
Mild Apprehensive
Nervous
Worried
Timid
Unsure
Anxious
Unsatisfied
Under par
Shaky
Unsure
Soft
Lethargic
Inadequate
Secure
Durable
Adequate
Able
Capable
Embarrassed

 

 

Words that describe behavior

 

The A-Z of English word and phrases that describe behavior.

A

active = always doing something: “She’s an active person and never wants to stay in.”

aggressive = being angry or threatening: “He’s aggressive and starts arguments.”

ambitious = wanting to succeed: “He’s ambitious and wants to lead the company.”

argumentative = always arguing with people: “He won’t accept what you say – he’s argumentative and loves to disagree!”

arrogant = thinking you are better than anyone else: “He always behaves as if nobody else’s opinion is important – “I find him very arrogant.”

assertive = being confident, so people can’t force you to do things you don’t want to do: “It’s important to be assertive at work.”

B

bad-tempered = in a bad mood: “What’s got into him lately? He’s so bad-tempered.”

big-headed = thinking you’re very important or clever: “I’ve never met anyone so big-headed!”

bossy = telling people what to do all the time: “He’s so bossy – he never lets me do things the way I want to do them.”

C

careless = not taking care: “He’s a careless driver – “I’m sure he’ll have an accident.”

caring = wanting to help people: “My boss is caring and often asks me how things are going.”

catty = saying nasty or spiteful things about other people: “I know you don’t like her, but calling her names is a bit catty.”

cautious = being careful, so that you avoid mistakes: “He’s cautious about investing money in the stock market.”

charming = pleasant and likeable: “What a charming man!”

cheeky = being rude or disrespectful: “It was a bit cheeky of him to ask for more money.”

clever = intelligent: “She’s a clever student and picks things up quickly.”

conceited = thinking you’re very clever, or better than others: “He’s so conceited – he thinks everyone should admire him.”

conscientious = doing something carefully, because you want to do it well: “She’s a conscientious student and always does her homework.”

considerate = thinking and caring about others: “My neighbour brought me flowers when I was in hospital – he’s very considerate.” (“That was considerate of him.”)

coy = pretending to be shy so that you don’t have to give information: “He’s very coy about his qualifications – maybe he doesn’t have any.”

creative = someone who can make or design things, or can think of solutions to a problem: “She’s creative and artistic.”

curious = wanting to know things: “I’m curious to find out what you think of the situation.”

D

deceitful = trying to make people think something, so that you get what you want: “He lied to get this job – he’s so deceitful.”

docile = quiet and submissive: “She’s a docile child and always does what she’s told.”

dogmatic = wanting others to accept your ideas without discussion: “He’s a dogmatic politician and always thinks he’s right.”

domineering = trying to control other people: “He’s loud and domineering in the office – it’s difficult to get him to listen to us.”

E

enthusiastic = having a lot of interest in something: “He’s an enthusiastic supporter of equal rights.”

excitable = someone who easily gets excited: “He gets very excitable about politics – it’s one of his passions in life.”

extroverted = outgoing and lively: “She’s extroverted and loves going out with people.”

F

faithful = being loyal to someone or something: “She’s a faithful friend.”

fickle = changing your mind and being unpredictable: “Politicians can be fickle when it suits them!”

flaky = slightly unstable and unreliable: “She’s a little flaky at times, but otherwise she’s a good worker.”

full of himself = acting proud of yourself: “He was full of himself after he got the promotion – it got annoying after a while.”

funny = making other people laugh: “He can be extremely funny when he’s in the mood.”

fussy = only liking certain things: “She’s fussy about what she wears.”

G

good-natured = kind and thoughtful: “She’s good-natured and always tries to help.”

grumpy = someone who tends to be in a bad mood: “He’s always grumpy in the morning and never says ‘hello’.”

H

happy-go-lucky = not worrying about what might happen in the future: “He’s a bit happy-go-lucky and doesn’t think about the future.”

I

impulsive = doing things without thinking first: “If he sees something he likes, he just buys it – he can be so impulsive at times!”

inconsiderate = not considering other people or their feelings: “It was a little inconsiderate of him not to give you a get-well card.”

introverted = opposite of extroverted: “He was introverted as a teenager, but became more confident as he got older.”

inventive = able to think up new ideas: “As head of Marketing, he can often think of inventive ways to keep his customers happy.”

irritating = annoying others: “He can be very irritating to work with.”

J

jokey = making jokes: “You’re in a jokey mood today, but we’ve got work to do!”

jolly = happy and cheerful: “It was the weekend and everyone was in a jolly mood.”

K

kind = thoughtful and caring: “My neighbour is kind – she looked after my cat when I was on holiday.”

L

loud-mouthed = someone who talks a lot and often says offensive things: “Don’t worry about what he said – he’s loud-mouthed at times.”

loyal = someone who is faithful and stands by you: “His colleagues were loyal to him when he was having problems with his boss.”

M

manic = behaving in a slightly crazy way: “We’re a bit manic at the moment – we’re rushing to finish the work before our deadline.”

manipulative = trying to get people to do what you want, by influencing or deceiving them: “She’s very manipulative when she wants something.”

moody = having unpredictable moods: “Some people think he’s moody – you never know if he’s happy or grumpy.”

N

nervous = uncomfortable with a situation: “I’m always nervous before an exam.”

O

old-fashioned = behaving or thinking in a way that isn’t modern: “He’s a bit old-fashioned and thinks women shouldn’t work.”

opinionated = having strong opinions: “He’s opinionated and dogmatic – the last person you want to negotiate with.”

P

passive = not assertive – doing what other people want you to do without arguing: “He’s passive at work, but domineering at home.”

perfectionnist = someone who wants perfection: “Her boss is a perfectionnist – no spelling mistakes are allowed.”

persuasive = being able to persuade people to do things or to accept your ideas: “He’s a persuasive talker.”

picky = only liking certain things or people: “She’s picky about her friends.”

playful = someone who likes to play and have fun: “You’re in a playful mood today!”

pleasant = nice and polite: “The bank manager was pleasant to me today.”

polite = showing good manners: “She’s polite and never forgets to say ‘please’ or ‘thank you’.”

pragmatic = being practical and aware of your limitations: “She’s pragmatic at work and only does what she can.”

Q

quick-tempered = getting angry quickly: “He was quick-tempered when he was young, but he’s more relaxed now.”

R

reserved = keeping your ideas and thoughts to yourself: “He’s reserved, but polite.”

rude = impolite: “He’s very rude and never says ‘please’ or ‘thank you’.”

S

scatter-brained / scatty = someone who often forgets things: “Don’t you remember where you put your wallet? You’re so scatter-brained!”

serious = not light-hearted: “He’s a serious student and always does his homework.”

shy = quiet, because you are not very confident: “He’s so shy and hates saying anything to people he doesn’t know.”

sincere = saying what you believe (opposite of insincere): “He’s sincere in his beliefs.”

slapdash = doing your work quickly and carelessly: “He’s got a very slapdash attitude – I doubt he’ll ever become a lawyer.”

slimy = trying to get what you want by being over-friendly: “That man is so slimy – he makes me feel sick!”

sly = doing things in a secretive way: “You never know what he’s up to – he’s sly and manipulative.”

spiteful = trying to hurt other people because you didn’t get what you wanted: “If she doesn’t get what she wants, she can be quite spiteful.”

T

thoughtful = someone who thinks a lot: “He’s a thoughtful person and won’t do anything unless he has considered the consequences.”

thoughtless = not thinking about people or the consequences of your actions: “I’m sure he didn’t mean to be rude – he can be thoughtless at times.”

trustworthy = someone you can trust: “My accountant is really trustworthy.”

V

volatile quickly changing moods: “He’s easily excitable and pretty volatile.”

W

witty = being able to make other people laugh by what you say: “He’s witty and charming – the perfect person to invite to a party.”

 

 

Personal Narrative Preparation

1.      Characters:  Who is in your personal narrative?

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2.    Setting: Where and when is the story happening?____________________________________

3.    What is the situation?

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4.    What is the plot line, i.e. what is happening in the story? Give three (3) specific details.

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5.    What, if any, crisis is occurring in your narrative?

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6.    How does the situation end (resolution)?

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7.    What is the physical and emotional end of your personal narrative?

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